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What to say in your letter
Before you start the letter:
think about the outcome you want. For example, you might want someone to
apologise, to offer you a refund or to change a decision
note down the main points you want to say – include relevant dates and times,
names of anyone involved, and how you’ve been affected
make a list of steps that have already been taken, such as phone calls to the
organisation
if you know about laws, policies or government guidance that may be relevant to
your point, include these in your notes.
Use these notes to help you write the letter. It can help to break the letter down into three
parts:
1. A beginning that explains who you are and why you’re writing
2. A middle section giving detail and facts
3. An end section that says what action you expect and when you expect to get a
reply.
Your letter is more likely to get the outcome you want if it includes all relevant information
and makes it clear to the reader what they’ve been asked to do next. It is important that
the reader is clear who sent the letter and how to get in touch with you. State your case
simply and clearly. Avoid being emotional. Be polite even if you’re frustrated, angry or
upset. Stick to the facts.
Signing off and checking
Close your letter with a final sentence like:
Thank you for your assistance
I look forward to hearing from you.
The letter ends with the sign-off, your signature and name.
Once you’ve finished writing the letter, don’t forget to read it over and check that you’ve
included everything you wanted to say. If you’ve used a computer, run the spell checker
to check for typing errors. It’s usually a good idea to get someone else to check it for you
as well, if you can. They may spot things you’ve missed.
Keep a copy
Make sure you sign, date and keep a copy of the letter. You may need to refer to your
letter again or provide a copy as evidence of action you’ve taken.
Enclosing other documents
You can include other documents, if you think it will help back up your case. For example,
you may want to include copies of receipts, bank statements, letters you’ve received or
letters you’ve sent.